Wait... this was pivot? Wow, most of those would have awed a flash artist. It's hard to give a review on the movie itself because they seemed to have several different styles, but in general: one or two of the animations were choppy and a bit hard to follow, and others were smooth but the camera panned side to side too much. You need to work a bit on your text. It is boxy and hard to read, and when it does appear, its appearance is too short to have time to read. The rest was amazing, good work.
1. Im sorry for the camera thing, but not all the animations are made on the same dimensions...
2. They are not choppy, they are in the double framed style, but u probably dont know that... also maybe the animation had too colorfull graphycs and ur computer couldnt handle it and it looked choppy...
3. Ummm, no offence, but the boxy text is the easiest to read i could find ? Its also the same one used in madness...
Better than most of its kind
I usually don't like flashes where animators try to manipulate pictures to make them look like the person is talking; it's crude and ineffective. Instead, in this you managed to make it seem more realistic. Great music, by the way, that band is weird. The only part that I thought should have been worked on was McCain saying no in a deep voice, because his mouth didn't move. It just stayed in an o shape and the camera zoomed in. The best came when he said "equals no." Mostly, it was a great movie, and hopefully you will update it to make it better.
The animation was very good. The humor was okay, but it was ruined by Jess laughing--her head was just twitching. Also, when the parrot emerged from the bush, it was very choppy. One frame there is a beak, next there is an entire parrot. I thought the animation could have maybe gotten an 8 from me if it had audio, and wasn't just plain out silence. Could have been better, but an all in all good movie.
Room for improvement
Well, first off, I want to say that the animation movement was good, especially for a fight. The camera movement complimented the fight itself. I was disappointed by length, though. It was way, way too short. It was only about six seconds. Also, why don't you edit the movie and add a preloader? That is possible.
You gave this the wrong age level too. There is only mild violence (excessive, I think, is a gigantic crapload of people dieing and blood flying absolutely everywhere), and there is no bad audio at all. At least, I didn't hear any.
This shouldn't have been submitted
I'm very annoyed that some people submit things like this, saying: "well it's only an experiment I'm a beginner I did well for a beginner!" No one cares if you're a beginner or not. The majority of the animation was horrible, actually the only reason you got a 1/10 is because the arm movement was slightly smooth. When the character walked out of the house, the house actually disappeared. I don't want to be unkind, but don't submit things unless you think it might be worth it for viewers.
if only people like you would shut up there would be alot more animators around
Not very funny
I didn't find the flash to be very funny. Most of the jokes were ones that I've already heard a million times and are now just old. The animation style was good, but the audio and other things were just not good. I like most of your other animations, but I didn't like this one.
I liked the movie. For some reason, because it was called pain, I thought it was going to be a fight scene, but it was nothing like that. I thought that you did an incredible job symbolizing all of the different pain. I thought that you did heartbroken the best. I couldn't bring myself to give you a ten for two reasons: First off, I don't like no arms. Sorry, that's just my opinion. It makes the characters sometimes move strangely. Secondly, those smiling faces at the end looked not so much happy as... well, to be blunt, insane. All in all, a wonderful movie.
I saw the other three before I created this account, and they were amazing. This surpassed them by far. First off, in all four, the animation itself is great. Everyone moves smoothly and is very realistic. The story is fantastic, and I love how you were able to not only show that you could do two very different moods in the same series, but give foresight to what was to happen by showing the different signs. Even in the first episode, it started out with him looking around at who was watching this encounter.
Beautiful. I've never seen anything better, and I doubt that anything could surpass this animation besides step five.
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